- Thu Jun 23, 2022 6:47 pm
#95945
Hi Sydneymkim,
Let me give you my breakdown.
P1:Intro puzzle: question: How purposeful movement if random tumbles?
By this, I mean that the first paragraph structurally introduces a puzzle. We know bacteria engage in purposeful movement toward an attractant and away from a repellant. They do so by moving in straight runs and random tumbles. That drives the questions by scientists: How can there be purposeful movement if the bacteria sometimes randomly tumble?
P2: Movement in context: Obs of movement toward attractant. Closer=more straight, less tumble.
By this, I mean that the paragraph provides a deeper description of bacteria movement in the context of an attractant. In that case, as the bacteria move closer to the attractant, they suppress the random tumble in favor of longer, controlled runs.
P3: How control movement: 2 theories 1) simul front/back test 2) different time test. Exp shows change time (2).
By this, I mean that the paragraph serves to provide an explanation of how bacteria know to move toward an attractant and proposes two possible theories. The first theory is that the bacteria simultaneously test the front and back, and move in the direction where the attractant has a higher concentration. The second theory says that as bacteria move, they test the attractant level at slightly different times to compare when they detect more attractants and use that to determine which direction to move. The passage ends with experimental data suggesting that the bacteria engage in the second method of detecting attractants.
Ultimately, outlining/diagramming passages is a very personal project. I tend to focus on the structural piece much more than the details. In most passages, I also have a lot more on viewpoints than I do here because there are not a ton of viewpoints expressed in this passage. There are the two possible theories of detection by bacteria, and that's covered well in P3.
I'd also prephrase (though not in writing) the main point: I'd be looking for something like "although bacteria engage in both predictable straight runs and random tumbles, they are able to direct their movement toward an attractant seemingly by detecting the attractant level at different times and use that information to suppress tumbles as they move closer to the attractant they seek. " Though this passage does not have a main point question, it is always helpful to note the main point to focus on the purpose of the passage before jumping into the questions.
Hope that helps!