Hi Annie!
This is definitely a tough passage! (And in fact it is on our list of "Killer RC Passages":
https://blog.powerscore.com/lsat/killer ... -all-time/). So the good news is that super tough passages like this are not all that common. And it's great that you were able to get the questions in this passage correct, even if it took you a lot of time.
With all passages, I try to take them one paragraph at a time. I read a paragraph and then pause briefly to think about what the main idea of that paragraph is, what I would come back to that paragraph to find, what are the important viewpoints, etc. It's especially helpful in passages like this that are kind of convoluted and can be tough to follow. I find that understanding the passages clearly after reading often makes it easier to go through the questions faster. This passage set has a lot of flowery language. So by breaking it down one paragraph at a time, I can simplify it and get the most important points out of it, without getting lost in the dense writing style.
But as with anything on the LSAT, increases in speed come mostly from training yourself to apply the same strategies and techniques over and over again until you can apply them quickly without thinking and immersing yourself in LSAT language until you become fluent in it. So keep working on these RC passages!
Best,
Kelsey