- Tue Feb 20, 2024 12:24 pm
#105374
Hi Ana,
If you're struggling to identify conclusion/premesis, try starting with whatever your guess is for the conclusion. Pull that idea out, and then ask yourself, what premesis support this idea? If it really is the conclusion, you should be able to find support for it and identify the argument structure. If you're incorrect, this should help you identify what role this idea is actually playing and the true conclusion.
For example, if we believe that the first sentence is the conclusion and pull that out, we are saying the conclusion is that "The tax bill passed 2 years ago provides substantial incentives for businesses that move to this area and hire 50 or more employees."
Now we have to ask - what information are we given to support this idea?
The other two sentences of the stimulus are " Critics say the bill reduces the government’s tax revenues. Yet clearly it has already created many jobs in this area. Last year, Plastonica qualified for incentives under the bill by opening a new plastics factory here that hired 75 employees". The first sentence introduces an argument against the bill, while the second sentence introduces a positive for the bill (it has created jobs) and an example of a company that qualified for incentives and hired 50 or more employees (which provides support for the conclusion sentence).
We can clearly see the structure of the argument this way - the stimulus is a conclusion, followed by an argument against the conclusion, followed by a premise and an example that supports that premise.
Now lets say you incorrectly identified the conclusion as the last sentence in the stimulus "Last year, Plastonica qualified for incentives under the bill by opening a new plastics factory here that hired 75 employees."
You would have struggled to find premises that support this idea. Looking at the other sentences left in the stimulus you have:
- Critics say the bill reduces the government’s tax revenues.
- Yet clearly it has already created many jobs in this area.
- The tax bill passed 2 years ago provides substantial incentives for businesses that move to this area and hire 50 or more employees.
Looking at these 3 remaining ideas, are they talking about Plastonica or building support for our conclusion sentence? No. They're talking about the tax bill - that's a good indicator that this example about Plastonica cannot be the conclusion or 'main point' of the stimulus' argument. We can see that this Plastonica information is really just an example of a company taking advantage of this tax bill that the rest of the stimulus is concerned with.