Hi flow,
The nature of "unless" statements prevents you from diagramming that way. There's both a formulaic and a more "intuitive" way of thinking about the logic of unless statements. The formulaic way of thinking about them (if you memorize it) will ensure you never inaccurately diagram "unless" statements.
Here's the formulaic way to think about it, using what PowerScore calls the Unless Equation.
The first step of the Unless Equation is to diagram the part of the statement modified by unless as the necessary condition. Here, Salisbury being part of the itinerary is modified by unless, so it becomes the necessary condition (on the right side of the arrow), per below:
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The second step of the Unless Equation is to negate (i.e., state the logical opposite of) the remaining condition, then diagram it on the sufficient side of the arrow. Here, the remaining condition is "[t]he candidate will make a stop in Paulsville," so we need to negate that to "[t]he candidate will NOT make a stop in Paulsville" then diagram that on the sufficient side of the arrow, per below:
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The intuitive reason this diagramming procedure is required is because of the nature of "unless" statements, which are speaking about exceptions to a normal situation. In this case the normal situation is that the candidate will make a stop in Paulsville. The exception to that (the necessary circumstance in which the candidate will NOT make a stop in Paulsville) is when Salisbury is part of the itinerary. In other words, if the exception (the candidate NOT making a stop in Paulsville) is going to occur, then it MUST be the case that Salisbury is on the itinerary. Since the unless statement speaks to that exception (candidate NOT making a stop in Paulsville) our diagram has to reflect that, and it has to reflect that what is necessary for that exception to occur is the "unless" condition (Salisbury being on the itinerary). Hence, the Unless Equation above, which gets us to the right logical diagram!
I hope this helps!
Jeremy Press
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