Looks like we have a few minor errors here, oadeboy1. First, the fact that the press is a profit-making institution is not a sufficient condition. There is no relationship in the stimulus that is equal to "if the press is profit-making, then it makes money to survive", which is what your first diagram represents. Instead, "it has to make money to survive" is equivalent to "if it is to survive, then it must make money", or:
Survive
Money
Your next diagram would be read in simple English as "if the press is profit-making, then it requires subsidy and outside control", but that is not what the author is saying. Instead, he is saying that if the press is NOT profit-making, then it must be subsidized and subject to outside control. It should be:
Profit Subsidy & Outside Control
Finally, the phrase "no one will subsidize honest journalism" has a tricky structure. We see claims like this that start with "no" or "none" frequently, and those terms actually negate the necessary condition. If no one will subsidize honest journalism, then if it is honest it will not be subsidized, and if it is subsidized it will not be honest. You have your negation on the wrong side in your diagram. It should be:
Honest
Subsidy
Subsidy
Honest
Putting this last bit together with the one prior, we can build a chain, like so:
Profit Subsidy
Honest
or
Honest
Subsidy Profit
Remember that your diagrams should read like an "if...then" statement that matches what was said in the stimulus. If the meaning is altered, the diagram is incorrect. Test your diagrams by saying to yourself "if (my sufficient condition), then (my necessary condition.)"
Give that another try and see if it makes more sense. Good luck!
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