- Tue Mar 16, 2021 2:17 pm
#85534
Hi Jocelyn,
This looks good overall!
The difference you're noticing between your Structure section and Adam's is a difference between taking a more high-level/abstract descriptive approach, focused on the author's argumentative purpose, versus taking a content-oriented descriptive approach (that gets down in the weeds of the specific subject matter, as you're doing). I think students should generally aim to reproduce structure maps more in line with Adam's approach. There are a few reasons for this: (1) it will help a ton with paragraph purpose questions, and organization questions, which usually require a higher-level descriptive approach to the logical purpose of the paragraph or section of the passage; (2) it will keep you focused on the forest instead of the trees, forcing you to zero in on what the LSAT cares about: what is the author arguing and how does she get there from a reasoning perspective?; (3) if you want to find the content corresponding to the descriptions you give, you can easily use notations to mark off things like the "phenomenon," the "explanation," the "question about the explanation," etc.
To do what Adam is doing, ask yourself with each paragraph, "what did the author do (argumentatively) in this paragraph?" Use descriptions similar to those you'd find in the answers to a Method of Reasoning question (introducing the background; stating a hypothesis; giving evidence of a hypothesis; stating an explanation; answering a question; contrasting two approaches, etc.).
In a high level sense, the Argument of a passage can be thought of as the author's main point (corresponding to the conclusion of an LR argument) and the evidence the author gives for that main point (corresponding to the author's premises in an LR argument). But the "Arguments" element of VIEWSTAMP really should focus you more on when you see smaller, LR-style arguments found within specific parts of paragraphs of the passage. For example, check out the Gray Marketing passage from PT 8, June 1993, Passage 2. In the third paragraph of that passage you see the trademark owners' specific argument against gray marketing, with a couple of supporting premises. It's that kind of small-scale argument (within the flow of a passage) that we want you to notice, in addition to the authors' overall main point and evidence. You don't see those in this passage, which is why both you and Adam left that section more of a blank here.
I hope this helps!
Jeremy Press
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